Fixed [0.22] Typos and inconsistencies

[Leeland]

I have downloaded and played the game through to the point of naming my rival and noticed a few things. Firstly, the typos:

Prof Elm says: "I have a acquaintance called MR. POKéMON."
Should read: "I have an acquaintance called MR. POKéMON."

Prof Oak says: "Im OAK! A POKeMON researcher."
Should read: "I'm OAK! A POKeMON researcher."

And second, I noticed a lot of inconsistencies with the words Pokémon and Pokédex.
The word Pokémon is displayed differently on several occasions, eg. Pokémon, POKeMON and POKéMON. You'll see in the screenshots below and even in the typos mentioned above.

Pokédex and Pokémon (correct, this is how it should look)

MR. POKéMON and MR. POKeMON

Pokémon, POKéMON and POKeMON

POKeDEX and POKeMON

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That is all so far. The game is coming along nicely.

 

[Leeland]

I played through the rest of the current version and took a screenshot every time I saw a typo or grammatical error. My screenshot folder had ~200 screenshots by the end. I won't bother listing each error as I don't think anyone will care enough.

 

[Leeland]

It seems someone cared enough to label this thread 'Confirmed'.
That means I'll post some more typos. My screenshot button actually stopped working by the time I got to Azalea Town (I have no idea why), so I haven't any proof of typos there (for now). I can say that typos got especially bad in Azalea Town. But for now here is a small list of things that bugged me a little.

Last time I checked the correct spelling is OK, with both upper case letters.

Should be an upper case C. (Bug Catcher Don). This goes for all bug catchers.

Again, should be an upper case K. (Bird Keeper Abe). This goes for all but one bird keepers.

A PC does not have the same limitations as a Gameboy, so there is no need to abbreviate Paralyze.

I'm pretty sure there should be an S in there (PokéDollars)

Last time I checked 'pitchblack' is not a single word. They are two separate words.

Text spills over the border a little.

Missing comma.

Missing a period here.

Missing another period.

Another period left out.

I'm sure this would read better as 'Player received the Zephyrbadge'

Missing an obvious exclamation point here.

Apostrophes missing. (Bill's and Player's)


Btw, as mentioned earlier there are a lot more typos and errors. I will have to play through the game again to catch them all.

 

[nilllzz]

fixed.

 

[K0rkki]

Pokedex on Zubat: "While flying ultrasonic waves from its mouth to check it's surroundings." Wait, wut? *smacks his pokedex* According to Bulbapedia in Gold it goes like this: "While flying, it constantly emits ultrasonic waves from its mouth to check its surroundings."

EITT: on more carefull look the pokedex seems to be cuting the info on many entrys. I wonder if it has something to do with window size.

 

[nilllzz]

also fixed (for zubat).