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Fixed [Indev 0.47.2] Various Typos

yourbone

Pokémon Ranger
Below is a list of a number of typos I have found within the Pokemon 3D game.

This screenshot shows a mispunctuation when the player talks to the Pokemon following behind them. The text says "[Pokemon's name here] cheeks are becoming rosy!" When it should say "[Pokemon's name here]'s cheeks are becoming rosy!" With an apostrophe after the Pokemon's name.
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This screenshot shows a typo when the player talks to the Pokemon following behind them once more. The misspelled word is "sudenly" when it should be spelled "suddenly".
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This screenshot shows an incomplete sentence/thought in the Pokedex when viewing the pokemon Seaking's description. The sentence could be changed to "During spawning season they gather from all over, causing rivers to appear a brilliant red." In this sentence, I added the word "they" in between the first part of the sentence in order for it to be complete. Also, as a small suggestion, in the description, the second "l" in the word brilliant appears to be larger than it really is due to the comma being in the line above it. I'm not sure if this should be changed or not because this may be how it was in the original Pokemon game.
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This screenshot shows the Pokemon Machop in the Pokedex. I believe there should be a comma after the word "power" in the description since it sounds incorrect without the small pause in between.
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This screenshot shows the Pokemon Pinsir in the Pokedex. There appears to be an incomplete thought/sentence in the description of the Pokemon when it says "With its pincer horns to sleep in at night." I'm not exactly sure how this should be fixed, but maybe it should read "It digs a hole with its pincer horns to sleep in at night." Again, I'm not sure how it should be fixed.
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This screenshot shows the Pokemon Venomoth in the Pokedex. The sentence in the description I believe is incomplete. I'm not exactly how it should be fixed, but maybe it could say something like "It attacks with its wings violently to scatter poisonous powder all around." Again, I'm not sure how it should be fixed, but I do know it needs to be fixed somehow.
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This screenshot shows the Pokemon Hydreigon in the Pokedex. The mispunctuation is the period after the exclamation point at the end of the sentence. The period must be removed since the sentence is already ended with an exclamation mark.
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This screenshot shows a Team Rocket Grunt in the Warehouse on Five Island. The sentence shown is ending with the wrong punctuation in a sense that the sentence is a question, but the character is also shown asking the question with emphasis. Perhaps the correct punctuation could be ended with "!?" or "?!".
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This screenshot shows a character inside the Pokemon Mart on Four Island. The misspelled word is "Loreli" when it should be "Lorelei".
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This screenshot shows a character in the Pokemon Center on Four Island. The misspelled word is "hasnt" when the correct spelling would be "hasn't".
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noni852

Pokémon Ranger
There's one on the way back to goldenrod when you are on Twirl Forest, the dude of the train says "Are you coming back to Godenrod already?"
 
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